Okay, I've done my bit. Now back to Patrick.
I'm looking at it as a Revision 1 -- much better contrast in the photos and text, making all the photos look less gray and washed out -- sharper, crisper, punchier. However, I was a bit disappointed in the resolution I was working from, as you could see clear JPEG compression artifacts in all the photos at 100% zoom ratio. So Patrick has provided me with the full resolution original scans and I hope to do a Revision 2 that will be even better still. But don't hesitate to buy into the digital version -- it's looking nice and crisp now! (I just tend to be my own worst critic and a perfectionist through-and-through!)